10 | Mid-Review Presentation + Feedback

Example Critique Questions

Keenan Gray

Appreciation comments

  • Appreciate the mixed media /research /prototyping /presentation visuals or skills

Example Questions

  1. What has been the largest challenge you faced during this studio?
  2. Who is the audience?
  3. Have you thought about X 
    1. Creating a scale model/storyboard/diagram;
    2. If more than one person could use it at a time? 
    3. If it was smaller/bigger?
  4. How often (or how much time) is the project used/engaged with
  5. Have you seen [reference a new precedent], this project reminds me of that!
  6. Ask about a choice 
    1. "Why did you use this material?", 
    2. "Why is it that size?", 
    3. "Why is it that color?"
  7. Why did you make it so abstract/literal?
    1. Propose which version you would prefer.
  8. Why should I be interested in this project?
  9. What is the one most important piece - if it all got destroyed what piece would you keep?
    1.  Why?
  10. What obstacle seperates your project from what it and what you dream it could be?

11. did you learn something new.... maybe about you?

12.What inspired you in the spaces?

14. who would it serve the most?

15.other function for object?

Presentation

Dina Chehab

Title

Student name

Mid-Review Presentation

Tessa Fast

PROJECT TITLE

student names

Part 1: Create your Presentation

Now that your team has developed an idea using sketches and prototyping, create a presentation using the template above to share your ideas with the class. 

Your presentation will address your Transitopia vehicle's concept, function, form, materiality, and how it utilizes green energy. 

Slide 1 - Project Title and Group Members' Names

Slide 2 - Project Statement (Introduce your concept and include your project statement)

    1. What will the vehicle/transit machine do?
    2. What problem is your vehicle addressing?
    3. What materials will it be made of?
    4. How will your vehicle/machine help, assist, or interact with humans?
    5. How will your vehicle harness green energy?

Slide 3 - Proposed User Profile - (Who do you imagine using your vehicle/transportation system?)

Slide 4 - Group Concept Sketches (Address your concept, function, form, material usage, green energy source, and how it interacts with people and the environment)

Slide 5 to Slide 7 - Group Members' initial prototypes (each group member should present one of the prototypes. what worked, what didn't work?)

Slide 8 - What areas are you seeking feedback on? (3 bullet points on the aspects of your project you'd like feedback on. 


Part 2 - Present 

You will present your slides to the class. 

Part 3 - Feedback + Critique 

Your teacher and fellow studio classmates will provide a minute or two of verbal feedback to you regarding your project. 

Take notes on the feedback they provide and the questions they ask. Listen more than you speak during this part of the process. It will help you immensely to consider the aspects of your project that people want to know more about. 


Prompt

Feedback is a crucial step in the design process. It exposes you to new ideas, methods, and techniques for developing your ideas further. Continuous feedback throughout the design process also creates a collaborative studio culture, where ideas are shared across projects, which leads to more exciting, developed, and innovative ideas!

Instructions

In this assignment, you will provide mid-project feedback to your peers.

You and your peers will consider this feedback as your teams decide how to proceed with their final project. Be thoughtful in your feedback, and refer to the guide below when giving feedback to your peers:

How to Give Useful Feedback:

  1. Feedback should never have mean intentions! You can be positive and critical at the same time.
  2. Be as specific as you can.
  3. What kind of feedback would you find helpful if it were your project? Try to give the type of feedback that you would like to receive.
  4. Always elaborate with WHY. Instead of just saying, "your idea is great," explain what part of their project you like, and why you think it is interesting.
  5. Ask questions! If something doesn't make sense to you, ask a question about that part of the project or idea. This is a great method for getting someone to think about new ideas, different perspectives, and new approaches.

Deliverable

Select 3 project teams to provide feedback to. After reviewing their mid-point presentations, click the "comment" button to add your feedback. You may also ask clarifying questions in your comments.